Saturday, May 16, 2009

REVISED: Magazine/Multimedia Project: Review And Graphic Extra














One of the loudest events I ever went to wasn’t even a rock concert…it was a Pow Wow held inside a gym at San Jose Community College on May 2, 2009.

With constant drumming, chanting and dancing amplified by multiple BOSE speakers inside the college’s gym, there was very little talking at this event, as it should be. After all, this was a revered exhibition to be experienced, not discussed.

The general purpose of Pow Wows is to allow different Native American tribes to reconnect with each other, the Earth and the Great Spirit. Dancing, singing and ceremonies are still performed the same way as their ancestors did before them.

This year, the American Indian Council for Higher Education (AICHE) of the San Jose/Evergreen Community College District held its first college Pow Wow. Their own goal is to increase Native American student enrollment while still engaging in the traditions of their ancestors. Master of the Ceremonies, Richard Charging Eagle, offered his opinion about promoting higher education, “Casino work should not be young Native Americans’ only career choice.”

There was no fee to enter, but I bought a Pow Wow t-shirt for $15 at the gym entrance to support the AICHE. The proceeds from the t-shirt and food sales support scholarships for Native Americans attending local colleges.

Outside, a mere dollar could buy either a freshly cooked Indian-style taco, a soft drink, or a typical American hot dog. The cooks worked tirelessly all day but still had time to smile and say hello to their customers. Since food was not allowed in the gymnasium where the ceremonies were being performed, participants and spectators ate and socialized outside on the college’s grassy areas.

Inside, the feverish beat shook both the walls and the ground, making film shooting and simple transactions with vendors a little challenging but do-able. Using simple hand gestures to indicate dollar amounts, I bought a Native American rattle for $8 (a black tortoise hand-painted on a dried gourd with seeds inside): I thought it was a good price for a unique keepsake I’ll probably have forever.

In fact, all of the hand-crafted items were accessible to view and touch, and both cash and credit cards were accepted by the quiet vendors.

In one corner of the gym, three women silently beaded jewelry at a long table, rarely looking up. Close to the dancing arena, there were three tables pushed together where volunteer babysitters sat with plenty of crayons and coloring books to keep the little ones busy. All seemed oblivious to the constant, rave-like beat.

Though I went to my first “inside-style” Pow-Wow without great expectations, my ears were still ringing and my heart was still beating hard to the rhythm of the drums when I left with my shaky footage, Native American rattle and Pow Wow T-shirt. I was energized for hours.

SJECCD’s first Pow Wow was an experience to be seen, felt and heard and not overanalyzed. If you missed this May event, don’t worry: rain or shine, another
heart-pounding Pow Wow is planned for next summer.


Thursday, May 14, 2009

Magazine/Multimedia Project: Video Broadcast And Script



A COMMUNITY COLLEGE POW-WOW

-60 Seconds-


(ANCHOR/VO)


THE LOCAL AMERICAN INDIAN COUNCIL OF HIGHER EDUCATION HELD ITS FIRST EVER POW-WOW TODAY AT SAN JOSE CITY COLLEGE.


FOR ELEVEN HOURS, SPECTATORS WERE INVITED TO-


EAT FRESHLY-COOKED NATIVE AMERICAN FOOD...


OR PERHAPS BUY HAND-CRAFTED JEWELRY...


CLOTHES...


OR CEREMONIAL ITEMS...AND LISTEN TO RITUAL DRUMMING...


AND OF COURSE, TO WATCH THE EXCITING AND COLORFUL INTERTRIBAL DANCING!...


THE COUNCIL'S MASTER OF CEREMONIES SAYS THE PURPOSE OF HAVING A POW-WOW AT COLLEGES IS TO MAKE THE YOUNG ONES REMEMBER THEIR HERITAGE WHILE ENCOURAGING THEM TO ACHIEVE A HIGHER EDUCATION.



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Sunday, May 10, 2009

Topical Blog Post #3

City of Alameda settles lawsuit filed by San Jose doctor's family

By Peter Hegarty

Bay Area News Group

San Jose Mercury News

Posted: 05/07/2009 02:25:09 PM PDT

Updated: 05/07/2009 02:25:10 PM PDT

The city of Alameda has agreed to pay $2.25 million to settle a lawsuit with the family of Dr. Zehra Attari, the San Jose pediatrician who died after she drove off a boat ramp into the Oakland-Alameda Estuary more than three years ago.

The family initially was seeking $11 million, arguing the city was negligent because it did not install adequate safety measures at the ramp, which is at the foot of Grand Street and slopes directly into the estuary.

"The settlement agreement is very specific in that both parties do not admit responsibility or negligence," City Attorney Teresa Highsmith said Wednesday.

The 55-year-old Attari vanished on a rainy evening in November 2005 as she was driving from her Oakland medical office to a conference on Bay Farm Island in Alameda.

Investigators found her submerged gray Honda Accord 43 days later, after they received a tip that someone matching her description was seen near the ramp.

At the time Attari disappeared, just a sign with the word "End" and a blinking red light warned motorists that the street was about to end.

The city later installed a temporary barricade.


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Is Justice Really Blind?


While there might have been a road marking deficiency at the Oakland-Alameda Estuary, that does not absolve a 55-year-old physician from driving off a boat ramp in the middle of the night.


Holes in the story:


  1. The person was a middle-aged female physician (she was very educated and had extensive driving experience).
  2. She was headed to a night conference at Bay Farm Island (an affluent neighborhood physically divided off from the rest of Alameda, not a professional site).
  3. The ramp she drove off had the typical "End" sign of a dead-end street with a flashing red warning light (both of which she ignored).

Though the death of this doctor is horrible, it was completely preventable. The city of Alameda had correctly identified the road condition. The doctor was responsible for choosing to drive through a dead-end street with two warning signs "to stop."


Even those who own boats have to be very careful when backing their own boats and trailers down boat ramps. If they reverse too far and submerge their own vehicles, they are responsible, not the owner of the boat ramp.


Yet, the doctor's family sued the city of Alameda for negligence, and after three years settled for $2.25 million.


I seriously doubt that there would be have been any financial settlement had the driver been an average person with a substandard education and lacking the ability to obtain expensive legal counsel. In that situation, like most boat ramp accidents, the cause of the incident and subsequent injury or death would have been negligent driving, and thus, the driver's fault.


Justice might be blind, but like most sightless people, can still feel the difference between a $1 bill and

a $100 bill.




Saturday, May 9, 2009

Revision: Focus Story Structure

Sixteen-year-old Pete Stenhoff is permanently disabled from a football injury last year.


During a high school game, Stenhoff blocked the rival team's ball carrier with his head. That impact cracked the vertebrae in his spine, leaving him confined to a wheelchair and unable to graduate with his Chula Vista High School class.


"I knew the risks involved when I decided to play football," Stenhoff says, then adds, "I wish I would have known just how bad it could be."


Apparently, the risks are high: of the 20,000 high school football injuries every year, 2,400 result in permanent disabilities. More than one-third of those disabilities are caused by injuries to the head and neck.


Steinhoff is currently taking correspondence courses to complete his high school diploma.


Friday, May 8, 2009

Online News Writing Exercise

Exercise 1: Go to a news web site and see if it measures up to these criteria for online writing:


SF Gate, Home of the San Francisco Chronicle


  1. Do the news items reflect immediacy? No, not on the home page: the stories there are dated. Right now, the current wildfires and major evacuations occurring just 400 miles away aren't even mentioned on the home page. One has to choose the Bay Area & State link in the index on the left to view the page where that current story is published.

  2. Does the site try to help readers save time? Yes, there is a shaded box page-link index on the far left on the page, where a reader would intuitively look.

  3. Is it quick and easy to get information? Yes, by clicking once on the aforementioned links, we can quickly locate the stories of the hour. Page load times are fast, so readers are likely to wait a few seconds to read the page.

  4. Does it provide both visual and verbal information? Yes, almost every major article link had a graphic image that was relevant. Today on the web version of the Chronicle, there was the same financial chart used about bank equity needs as there was in its print version. The chart was almost necessary to correctly summarize the story for the public.

  5. Do the stories contain lists and bullets to make them easier to scan? Lists, no. Bullets are used often in fast-facts boxes and article subheadings.

  6. Are the stories broken into "chunks"? Yes, most of the articles are "chunked" for readability. Only very complex stories are written in longer forms, which is preferable for print.

  7. Do stories provide hyperlinks to additional information? Most of the stories in the web version are final and do not contain additional links.h)

  8. Are there opportunities for readers to "talk back"? Yes. There is an index link to the opinion page to enter comments as well as the opportunity to comment and discuss the stories at the bottom of every article.

  9. Does the site use multimedia to enhance understanding and add appeal? Yes. Perhaps the e-edition has more, but the free San Francisco Chronicle website edition has live views of traffic, weather patterns, updated home sales, movie trailers and advertisers' images and video clips.

Sunday, May 3, 2009

Topical Blog # 2

Self-publishing has become increasingly more popular in the past decade.


However, most self-published books don't make the best seller list, and, because of marketing costs, don't even make it to the major distribution centers like Barnes and Noble or Amazon. Even hiring a publicist can't make a "fair" book a "great" one.


Not that vanity publishing is a terrible idea by any means. But, to be clear, large publishing houses are for-profit businesses and thus demand professional writing and editing. The guidelines for vanity publishing are not as rigid.


Recently, an acquaintance quickly published a book of her own poetry (which I believe to be a difficult genre to publish at any rate.) At first I believed she paid a large fee to be published, which is the most common scenario with vanity publishing, but I was wrong. There was no fee.


Since it seemed odd, I perused the publisher's legalese that's available on its website: I have only determined that the publisher forever retains all printing rights to any book it publishes.


The publisher doggedly claims it is not a vanity publisher. Since I have yet to see an actual contract it distributes to its clients, I am currently unaware of any "loopholes" that might be in the fine print there.


Still, I can't help but be suspicious that the publisher is exactly what it claims not to be: a vanity publisher, in disguise.


Please feel free to view the publisher's website: X


What do you think?



Focus Story Structure

Sixteen-year-old Pete Stenhoff is permanently disabled from a football injury last year.


In an attempt to block the ball carrier with his head during a high school game, the vertebrae in Stenhoff's spine were cracked. The injury left him confined to a wheelchair and unable to graduate with his Chula Vista High School class.


"I knew the risks involved when I decided to play football," Stenhoff says, then adds, "I wish I would have known just how bad it could be."


Apparently, the risks are high: of the 20,000 high school football injuries every year, 2,400 result in permanent disabilities. More than one-third of those disabilities are caused by injuries to the head and neck.


Steinhoff is currently taking correspondence courses to complete his high school diploma.


Thursday, April 30, 2009

Memo: Magazine/Multimedia Project

Memo

Date: April 26, 2008

To: Cynthia McCune, Instructor

From: J.J., student

RE: Magazine/Multimedia Project Proposal

  • For the project's magazine segment I propose to write a short news feature about the American Indian Council of Higher Education's POW WOW event at San Jose City College on May 2. There will be dancing contests, drumming and native craftwork and available for spectators to enjoy. Since there are several activities occurring during the same day, I will choose the most interesting POW WOW exhibits to learn about and summarize into a 500 word magazine-style article. I will also include either a fast-facts box about a specific American Native item or activity or include a specific photo with text that further explains the purpose of the POW WOW. I plan to use a slide show presentation or a short video of an activity in progress with voice-over narration for the multimedia segment of the project.


Tuesday, April 28, 2009

Find That Feature Lead

Santa Clara County braces for possible surge in swine flu cases - but so far, no panic

by Ken McLaughlin

Mercury News Posted: 04/27/2009 07:15:29 PM PDT Updated: 04/28/2009 05:52:21 AM PDT

Quarantine rooms are ready. Special face shields, gowns and gloves are within reach.

But while calls to doctors and emergency room visits are rising over the swine flu scare, a survey of South Bay clinics and emergency rooms on Monday showed little panic and few crowds.

1) This lead is called a roundup lead, which is used "to impress the reader with a longer list" instead of just focusing on one person, place or thing.
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Facebook gives users more flexibility

By Scott Duke Harris

Mercury News

Posted: 04/27/2009 03:58:18 PM PDT

To opt in or opt out? Facebook users face the question yet again as the social-networking giant Monday enabled the stream of information central to the user experience to be displayed outside of Facebook.com — as a window or "pop-up" feed on other Web sites, on your computer desktop or mobile phones.

2) This "lazy lead" begins with a question. According to author Tim Harrower, this type of lead should be reconsidered before publishing.


Sunday, April 26, 2009

Topical Blog Post #1

Are You Scared Yet?

Yes, I am.

And no, I’m not talking about the latest slasher movie or a mass murderer on the loose...

I’m talking about the economy.

Since I survived the Reagan-era recession, I thought this would just be another time-obstacle to overcome.

Wrong!

It’s taking WAY too long to recover this time.

My union has warned me that there probably won’t be any more work for us until next year.

My credit cards interest rates have doubled overnight without reason.

I have to supplement my elderly mother and her husband even more so now, because their rent went up when the economy went down.

My latest medical insurance won’t pay for my prescriptions but continue to extract premiums from my bank account every month.

I can't put off major purchases forever: my old car needs major work (costly repairs that exceed the value of the car) and I need three dental crowns ($1,200 a pop) among other expensive, needful things.

I'm not complaining: I have endured tough times before. I worked outdoors on a frozen island for two years. I had eight spine surgeries in five years. Several friends and most of my family have already passed on. Ah! But life goes on, and things always turn around, right?

Normally, I would say yes.

Yet...it’s almost May, 2009. Things aren’t turning around yet. The economy seems to be getting worse instead of better. Mass layoffs are still occurring. Banks aren’t lending while small, chain and conglomerate businesses are closing forever. The way it's going, I foresee my own union dissolving.

And now...now, I’m getting scared.


Thursday, April 23, 2009

Blog Post: Magazine

www.wired.com


Of all the monthly publications I actually buy and read, I've found that "Wired Magazine" has the most diverse and intriguing subjects one can hope to find in a single magazine.


One of Conde Nast's Publications, this monthly rag has successfully survived recent industry cuts. According to Conde Nast's Media Kit, as of March 2009 "Wired Magazine" has more than 700,000 readers: almost 90 percent are subscribers. More than half of "Wired Magazine's" readers are: 18 to 34 years old, college educated, make more than $75,000 a year and own their own residences.


Created in 1993, "Wired Magazine's" premise is to "deliver a glimpse into the future of business, science, entertainment, education, culture and politics."


"Wired Magazine" contains off-beat, creative articles ranging from "box-form" iPhone shortcuts to researched commentaries about rising sea levels threatening the Netherlands today. Blend "Popular Science", "Laptop" and "Reason" magazines together with a a dash of dark humor and... Presto!...we have the exceptional "Wired Magazine."



Sunday, April 19, 2009

Final Broadcast Assignment

WATCH "THE CLOTHESLINE PROJECT" NEWSCAST


-60 Seconds-


(ANCHOR ON CAM)


IT WAS A GLOOMY MORNING WHEN VOLUNTEERS AT DE ANZA COLLEGE HUNG 30 COLORED T-SHIRTS ON A CLOTHESLINE ACROSS THE CAMPUS CENTER PATIO.


THE MARCH TWENTY-FIRST "CLOTHESLINE PROJECT" WAS ONE OF MANY OCCURRING YEAR-ROUND THROUGH-OUT THE USA. ITS MISSION IS TO EDUCATE AND STOP VIOLENCE AGAINST WOMEN AND CHILDREN, BUT MALE VICTIMS ARE EQUALLY ENCOURAGED TO PARTICIPATE.


(ANCHOR/VO)


THE T-SHIRTS VIVIDLY DESCRIBED PERSONAL EXPERIENCES OF DOMESTIC VIOLENCE THAT RANGED FROM THE DISTURBING…TO THE NIGHTMAR-ISH.


HEALTH DIRECTOR MARY-JO LO-MAX SAID THE CONCEPT OF THE T-SHIRTS IS TO ALLOW VICTIMS TO UN-BURDEN THEMSELVES OF THEIR HIDDEN ABUSE AND ENCOURAGE OTHER VICTIMS TO DO THE SAME.


WHITE T-SHIRTS, COLORED MARKERS AND PRIVATE TABLES WERE OFFERED TO ALL VICTIMS TO ANON-UH-MUS-LEE DECORATE AND ADD TO THE EXHIBIT: THEY WERE ASKED ONLY NOT TO USE FULL NAMES ON THE SHIRTS.


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Saturday, April 11, 2009

Broadcast News Story

GOVERNOR SCHWORZ-EN-NEGGER ADOPTS BEAR

45 Seconds


STARTING TODAY, A GIANT BRONZE BEAR STANDS GUARD OUTSIDE GOVERNOR SCHWORZ-EN-NEGGER'S OFFICE.


SPOKESMAN AIR-RUN MC-LEER SAID THE GOVERNOR SAW THE STATUE AND QUICKLY BOUGHT IT FROM AN ASPEN ART GALLERY DURING A RECENT FUNDRAISER IN COLORADO. GOV. SCHWORZ-EN-NEGGER BELIEVES SCHOOL CHILDREN VISITING THE CALIFORNIA CAPITOL WILL ENJOY HAVING THEIR PHOTO TAKEN WITH THE BEAR.


THE GOLDEN BROWN STATUE GREATLY RESEMBLES THE STATE ANIMAL OF CALIFORNIA-THE GRIZZLY BEAR-WHICH ALSO ADORNS EVERY STATE FLAG OF CALIFORNIA.


THE LIFE-SIZE BEAR WAS CREATED BY ARTIST STEVEN BENNETT.


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Thursday, April 9, 2009

Broadcast Style Exercise

HOLIDAY TRAVELER DISCOUNTS
60 Seconds


NORTHWEST AIRLINES ANNOUNCED TODAY THAT IT'S CUTTING ITS DOMESTIC FARES UP TO 40-PERCENT FOR HOLIDAY TRAVELERS.

NORTHWEST C-E-O FRANK DUH-WIT SAID THEY LIKE TO THINK OF IT AS A HOLIDAY GIFT TO THEIR CUSTOMERS.

WITH THE DISCOUNTED PRICES, A ROUND TRIP BETWEEN BOSTON AND SAN FRANCISCO WILL ONLY COST 400-DOLLARS.

THE NON REFUNDABLE TICKETS MUST BE PURCHASED BETWEEN NOVEMBER 12 AND JANUARY 14 IN THE LOWER-48 STATES, ALASKA AND CANADA.

DEPENDING ON TRAVEL DATES,
DISCOUNTS WILL VARY. POPULAR HOLIDAY TRAVEL DATES EXCLUDED FROM THE OFFER ARE NOVEMBER 23, NOVEMBER 26, DECEMBER 23 AND DECEMBER 26.


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Saturday, April 4, 2009

Soft Broadcast Lead

WHERE THERE'S SMOKE...THERE'S CAKE!
45 seconds

EARLIER TODAY, 24 TULSA FIREMEN CRASHED A 95-YEAR OLD WOMAN'S BIRTHDAY PARTY...THE LIGHTING OF 95 CANDLES ON A BIRTHDAY CAKE FOR MABEL MCCULLOUGH (MUH-CUL-uh) SET OFF A SMOKE DETECTOR, SENDING THE LOCAL FIREFIGHTERS RACING TO THE SCENE OF A BIRTHDAY PARTY. FIRE CHIEF LONNIE LAMB SAID IT WAS THE FIRST TIME HE'D EVER SEEN A BIRTHDAY CAKE TRIGGER A SMOKE ALARM...WITH DANGER DOWSED, THE FIREMEN SKIPPED HAVING CAKE WITH THE REVELERS BUT STAYED LONG ENOUGH TO HAVE THEIR PHOTO TAKEN WITH THE BIRTHDAY GIRL.
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Friday, March 27, 2009

Copy Edit The World Set #2: 2/21-4/4

1) From the Feb. 22, 2009 print copy of the San Jose Mercury News above there is a typo in the article above: the author used the word onionskin instead of two words onion skin. The electronic copy is correct. (2 points)
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Two more errors from a Feb. 21, 2009 Mercury News website article below:

2)In paragraph three, the word should be Foothill Boulevard, not Foohill Boulevard. (2 points)

3) In paragraph seven, the word should be Strobridge Avenue, not Strobridge Avenuye. (2 points)

http://www.mercurynews.com/ci_11756765?source=rss

I-580 freeway shooting injures driver, sheriff's deputy

By Sharon Noguchi

Mercury News

Posted: 02/21/2009 03:53:20 PM PST

By Sharon Noguchi

Mercury News

A driver who had been traveling on Interstate 580 near Castro Valley and an Alameda County sheriff's deputy who had been standing near an adjacent street underwent surgery early this morning after both were struck by bullets fired from another car driving on the freeway.

The driver was in serious condition and the deputy in fair condition at Eden Medical Center in Castro Valley. The Alameda County Sheriff's Department did not release any identities in the bizarre incident, in which the deputy apparently was randomly shot. A passenger in the car suffered a minor gunshot wound. Deputies have made no arrests.

Sgt. J.D. Nelson gave this account:

Sometime before 1 a.m., a westbound car on Interstate 580 fired shots toward a dark blue Ford Explorer, also traveling westbound. The driver of the Explorer was struck in the head, and the car careened from the slow lane off the freeway, though a fence and across adjacent Foohill Boulevard. The car ended up in a business parking lot near 164th Avenue.

One of the bullets struck the sheriff's deputy, who coincidentally with another officer was standing on the sidewalk along Foothill Boulevard near 164th Avenue questioning a pedestrian. The deputy was struck in the leg or foot.

The car of the assailants did not stop, and no description of it or its occupants was available.

Officers from several jurisdictions, firefighters and paramedics converged

on the scene. Initially, "it was a little chaotic," said Nelson, as the deputies could not make sense of what was happening. They heard gunshots, then a car came crashing off the freeway toward them and one officer was hit by a bullet, he said.

One round of shots struck a house on the hill above Foothill. The occupants, who were not injured, heard the noise of the impact and called police.

In the ensuing investigation, the California Highway Patrol shut down all four lanes of westbound I-580, diverting traffic at Strobridge
Avenuye
and rerouting it to 150th Avenue near San Leandro. The freeway reopened at 6:20 a.m. Investigators also blocked off Foothill Boulevard until early morning.

The driver, a passenger and the injured deputy were transported to Eden Hospital. The driver sustained serious head injuries, and the passenger sustained minor injuries. The deputy is in fair condition and expected to recover, Nelson said. A third passenger was uninjured.

Anyone with information about the incident may call the Alameda County Sheriff's Department at 510 667 7721.

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Two errors from the Spartan Daily website article below:

4) In paragraph 3, the word should be said, not daid. (2 points)

5) In paragraph 6, the word "from" should be inserted between words "his" and "mix".
(2 points)


SPARTAN DAILY Home > News Award-winning poet discusses expressions of grief and love at reading

http://media.www.thespartandaily.com/media/storage/paper852/news/2009/02/26/News/AwardWinning.Poet.Discusses.Expressions.Of.Grief.And.Love.At.Reading-3647298.shtml

Stephanie Vallejo Issue date: 2/26/09 Section: News Page 1 of 2

Poetry expressing simple life experiences and a story of how a person grieved for a lover who died of AIDS, captured the attention of more than 150 people at the King Library Tuesday.

The Center for Literary Arts invited Mark Doty, a 2008 National Book Award winner, to SJSU to read some of his works to students, staff and visitors.

Erica Wilkerson, a sophomore biology major who daid she only attended the event for extra credit, ended up enjoying herself.

"I have this thing where I fall asleep while people are talking," she said. "But I didn't fall asleep the whole time."

Doty started the night with a poem titled, "The House of Beauty," about a time he saw a beauty shop being burned.

The nine poems he read were a mix [WORD MISSING] his published works, poems and prose...
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An error from the Journalism 61 - News Story 5: Runaway Truck assignment in the third paragraph should be from, not form:

6) Maples was able to grab his hand and, with some help form Police Chief Scott Kirkland and Detective Ken Zinc, he was able to pull the driver to safety. (4 points)

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An error from the Journalism 61 - Reporting with Numbers assignment in the second exercise should be median, not media:

7) *Calculate the media prison term for people of aggravated assault. (4 points)

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8) March 17, 2009: http://www.nbcbayarea.com/ Local news online headline: Woman Buys $5,000 Fake Cold Bar from Man She Can't ID

The word Cold should be Gold. The web news article was first published on March 17,2009 at 3:25 PM PDT. The typo was fixed and the article updated 50 minutes later. (2 points)


Copy Edit The World Set #2 Total: 2+2+2+2+2+4+4+2
=20 points


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Friday, March 13, 2009

Libelous or Not?

In Tim Harrower's book "Inside Reporting", he states there are five criteria that constitute libel:

1) Statements must be false, based on facts that are wrong or unverifiable

2) Statements must be defamatory

3) Statements must be published

4) Plaintiffs must be identifiable

5) The defendant must be at fault through negligence or malice


Based on this list and some common sense, here are the statements and their libel statuses:


S1) A sophomore at Springfield University claims a chemistry professor has sexually harassed her.

Not libelous.

S2) Karen Hart, 123 Hill Hall, says the professor, George O.T. Jungle, has touched her during tutoring sessions in his office and has invited her to his apartment several times. She said she declined his invitations.

Could be considered libelous-criteria one needs to be verified. If the statements are true, there is no libel case. If the facts are proven to be false, there is. Unless one of the parties wanted be be identified, names should be omitted until the case is closed and home addresses should never be disclosed to the public.

S3) "I am having trouble in the class and I have to go see him to get help with my papers and projects," Hart said. "But I am scared to go in his office now."

Not libelous.

S4) Jungle denied having an improper contact with the student and threatened this newspaper with a libel suit if it published the story.

Like S2, it could be considered libelous-criteria one needs to be verified. If he is making a false claim, there is no case. If he is stating the truth, he has a libel case against the publication.

S5) Hart said she is thinking of filing a formal complaint with the university.

Not libelous.

S6) "I don't know how to do that," she said. "I don't know what to do."

Not libelous.


It would be important to note the age of Ms. Hart - if she is a minor, this is a more serious accusation. I would not run the story until a formal complaint was filed with the institution, the police notified and a formal report filed that would be accessible to the press. If the case progressed, witnesses might be found who knew of earlier events relevant to the case. This additional input could help verify the facts and motives of all parties involved. Otherwise, it's just a "he said/she said" drama that is not newsworthy at this point.


Thursday, March 12, 2009

Ethical Decision-Making

(From the Poynter Online website: Bob Steele's article Talk About Ethics)
1. What do I know? What do I need to know?
2. What is my journalistic purpose?
3. What are my ethical concerns?
4. What organizational policies and professional guidelines should I consider?
5. How can I include other people, with different perspectives and diverse ideas, in the decision-making process?
6. Who are the stakeholders -- those affected by my decision? What are their motivations? Which are legitimate?
7. What if the roles were reversed? How would I feel if I were in the shoes of one of the stakeholders?
8. What are the possible consequences of my actions? Short term? Long term?
9. What are my alternatives to maximize my truth telling responsibility and minimize harm?
10. Can I clearly and fully justify my thinking and my decision? To my colleagues? To the stakeholders? To the public?

Questions:
Scenario 1 - Bribery Case

If I personally saw some documents and knew they were relevant, I would be suspicious as to why she left such sensitive documents in plain sight. I would later ask in the interview if she has any documentation about the case. If the official said yes, but was unwilling to show them to me, I would immediately notify my editor about the paperwork. The editor would most likely call the case prosecutor who would probably obtain a search warrant for the documentation. If the official said no, I would notify my editor, but she or he could "kill" the idea to obtain the documentation right then.

Scenario 2 - Nursing Home

If I had a notarized contract with my editor stating (1) it was the publication's idea (2) [it] would pay all future attorney fees and court costs if a legal battle resulted (3) my job would be protected regardless of the outcome, you bet I would! Remaining anonymous before and after the story was published would be ideal, but legally risky. A good journalist sometimes has to get dirty to get the "real dirt"!

Scenario 3 - Crediting Sources

We must always credit the original source who obtained quotes whether they are found on the internet or in print materials.

Calculate Your FOG Index

Sholin states that the future of the news is here and there will be no more whining about it (19/1). It's not Google or Craigslist's fault (6/2). Local papers need to run local features (7/3). Journalists have to be multi-taskers: they should be able to shoot AP quality photos, use software like In Design and edit their own work (24/4). They should incorporate major media delivery carriers like Twitter and RSS feeds as soon as they become available to the press (21/5). Online news delivery, archived articles and photos should always be free to view (13/6). Journalism school professors need to stay updated with the latest media technology and be teaching the same to their students (20/7). Those who protest new media methods face the other option: being cut from the force (15/8).


Total words: 125


19+6+7+24+21+13+20+15=125/8 = 15.625: there are approximately 16 words per sentence and 17 "hard" words in the writing sample.


FOG Index: 16+17(X).4 = 13.2, or a college freshman's education status.


Since experts are advising having a FOG Index of 7 or 8, my own FOG Index of 13 is too high for news writing.


It's obvious I need to write shorter sentences, remove unnecessary modifiers, stop repeating words and reduce the "journalese".



Tuesday, March 10, 2009

Got What It Takes To Be A Reporter?

  1. I enjoy reading. I consume a lot of books and magazines. Mostly True: 2 points
  2. For me, writing is rewarding. And I am confident that people genuinely enjoy the stuff I write. Mostly True: 3 points
  3. I don't pay much attention to spelling. My punctuation and grammar probably ain't great either. Not True: 2 points
  4. I'm generally adept at computer technology: sending e-mail, downloading files, shooting digital photos, etc. Mostly True: 1 points
  5. I can organize my ideas and write quickly when I need to. Mostly True: 3 points
  6. I'd make a good game show contestant because I 'm pretty good at remembering facts and trivia. Mostly True: 2 points
  7. I'm efficient and self-sufficient when it comes to doing extensive library or internet research. Mostly True: 2 points
  8. I'm generally more curious than most people I know. Mostly True: 3 points
  9. In public situations, I'm pretty shy: I avoid asking questions in class, for instance. Not True: 2 points
  10. I think it's unpatriotic to question or criticize the government. Not True: 1 point
  11. When I choose a career, I'll require a stable, 9-5 job where my workday is routine and I make big money. Mostly True: 0 points
  12. If I really want something, I'm tenacious until I get it. Mostly True: 3 points
  13. When I'm under pressure, I can keep my cool and stay focused without losing my temper. Mostly True: 1 point
  14. When stranger and teachers criticize what I write, it really bugs me. I mean, who do they think they are? Not True: 2 points

  15. 27 points: You're a solid contender for a successful journalism career. You've got the personality and ability a good reporter needs.

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    This is not news. I've been doing my own investigative journalism and research projects before computers were standard communicating devices. I wasn't getting paid but I was hooked.


    I found that there is usually a back story to every story, and with enough digging the truth can be found and properly exposed. I write at least 25 letters and even more emails a year to government officials questioning the validity of "personally driven" bills, pork projects, discriminatory policies and corrupt activities within the ranks.



    Not surprisingly, I am also very concerned about the average consumers being "ripped off". I could easily see myself working and writing for Consumer Reports, for instance. Fraud of every type is a pet peeve of mine.


    On the lighter side, researching the historic, strange and exotic is irresistible: I can also see myself being a travel writer and perhaps writing niche books in those genres.


    It's no secret: I've already had more than a couple of careers in my lifetime and possess a mortgage. Therefore, I suspect I'll freelance part time until I am compensated well enough to finally write full time.